"ओ बी ओ लाइव तरही मुशायरा" अंक-167
परम आत्मीय स्वजन,ओ बी ओ लाइव तरही मुशायरे के 167 वें अंक में आपका हार्दिक स्वागत है ।इस बार का…See More
SURRENDER
SURRENDER
Like all episodes involuntary
as if inevitably ordained,
mysteriously, I lost my license to drive.
Yes, I felt some measureless grief at first,
but now I smile and say,"Oh, how very nice!"
For I can now sit back and insignificantly reflect
and let my memories replay their tide and crest,
write poetry on life, or sing ever so swiftly
the one melody that haunts me secretly.
Or, just be there, .."aware" of my frozen feelings,
my apprehensions and irrevocable infernal fears,
and watch them glide in procession as I now rest
in the blessed company of my personal God
that in your solitary moments, you too have met.
For even when I had the license to drive,
it was never "I" who drove,
He was always the One, driving.
It was all His Will and His Grace
that took me from place to place,
from uncertainty to certainty, and
sometime back to another uncertainty.
And through it all I mistakenly thought
I was the doer, I was the driver, when
He was doing it all.
Oh, in this vortex of my blnding ego,
how miserably I was lost !
Whether I stayed on course, or went astray,
only He knew the goal, and He knew the way,
or, when or where I need to be, I can only pray,
keeping me ever so guarded,
protected from myself, from my own insignificance.
So, my dear God, this I ask of Thee,
please continue to be my charioteer,
make me mindful to not get lost any more,
and out of this world's pitiable
untold wilderness of Maya, bring me ashore.
I give You my power of attorney for everything,
keep my "driver's license" for ever, for I now am
staying under Your watchful effulgence so pure.
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सदस्य टीम प्रबंधनPermalink Reply by Dr.Prachi Singh on -
through it all I mistakenly thought
I was the doer, I was the driver, when
He was doing it all...........................................this is the illusion, Maya that one thinks that he is a does.
when one surrenders to the kingdom of CREATOR , wisdom comes by itself.
So, my dear God, this I ask of Thee,
please continue to be my charioteer,.................best wish, one can ever make.
I give You my power of attorney for everything,...............true surrender.
Thanks respected Vijay Nikore ji for sharing such a nice elevated thoughtful composition.
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Permalink Reply by vijay nikore on
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Respected Prachi ji:
I am grateful for your thoughts. So kind of you to offer this lavish praise to this poem.
With regards and best wishes for the New Year.
Vijay Nikore
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सदस्य टीम प्रबंधनPermalink Reply by Dr.Prachi Singh on -
Heartiest Wishes for the New Year Resp. Vijay Nikore Ji
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On my personal e mail, in addition to replies from "Believers in Him", I got two interesting replies from atheists ... one of them saying that this poem makes him want to believe in God. Wow!
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कृपया ध्यान दे...
आवश्यक सूचना:-
1-सभी सदस्यों से अनुरोध है कि कृपया मौलिक व अप्रकाशित रचना ही पोस्ट करें,पूर्व प्रकाशित रचनाओं का अनुमोदन नही किया जायेगा, रचना के अंत में "मौलिक व अप्रकाशित" लिखना अनिवार्य है । अधिक जानकारी हेतु नियम देखे
2-ओपन बुक्स ऑनलाइन परिवार यदि आपको अच्छा लगा तो अपने मित्रो और शुभचिंतको को इस परिवार से जोड़ने हेतु यहाँ क्लिक कर आमंत्रण भेजे |
3-यदि आप अपने ओ बी ओ पर विडियो, फोटो या चैट सुविधा का लाभ नहीं ले पा रहे हो तो आप अपने सिस्टम पर फ्लैश प्लयेर यहाँ क्लिक कर डाउनलोड करे और फिर रन करा दे |
4-OBO नि:शुल्क विज्ञापन योजना (अधिक जानकारी हेतु क्लिक करे)
5-"सुझाव एवं शिकायत" दर्ज करने हेतु यहाँ क्लिक करे |
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